The Official Writing Challenge
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I want Ellie to win this Game!
09/21/08
SMILE...I could almost see the game board.
09/21/08
Very well-written. Great job!
Your paragraph close to the end that tells what Ellie knows about the game of life with God in charge is an excellent summary of how God is in charge of our lives.
10/02/08
Engaging presentation of live through the perspective of a game. In the past I could so relate to your comment, "Ellie longs to slam the Game Board shut and put it to rest forever in its well-worn, skinny cardboard coffin-of-a-box. She wants to quit playing."