The Official Writing Challenge
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09/20/08
Hehe This is cute. I could just see the squirrel standing there among his acorns, looking up.
09/22/08
Cute story. Sometimes night sounds unnerve us. Very nicely done.
09/22/08
Oh yes, wonderful and creative way to remind us that, "all that on which he dined and wined -- in life, plus all the land around…just belong to our God…. -- And our God alone…" Your 3 am bushy-tailed guest must have given you a fright… I enjoyed your internal rhyme, and I LOVE the word "visitant." I'd never heard this word, what a great list of meanings it has. How cleverly you've written this precious poem with a wonderful message!