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Hehe This is cute. I could just see the squirrel standing there among his acorns, looking up.
Cute story. Sometimes night sounds unnerve us. Very nicely done.
Oh yes, wonderful and creative way to remind us that, "all that on which he dined and wined -- in life, plus all the land around…just belong to our God…. -- And our God alone…" Your 3 am bushy-tailed guest must have given you a fright… I enjoyed your internal rhyme, and I LOVE the word "visitant." I'd never heard this word, what a great list of meanings it has. How cleverly you've written this precious poem with a wonderful message!