The Official Writing Challenge
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09/21/08
This is lovely. A nice "feel" to this piece, and a great message, as well. Well done!
09/21/08
Very nice word choices...a lovely poem. Excellent:)
09/21/08
Wonderful free verse poetry, and I particularly appreciate your lovely use of alliteration.
09/22/08
I like jigsaw puzzles. I could see this one coming together. Very nicely done. Good wording.
09/22/08
Great poetry. I like the idea comparing life to a puzzle, where it's not finished until all the pieces are where they're supposed to be. Nicely done with great choice of words.
09/22/08
I loved this line 'creating community to find the fit.' Nice alliteration and beautifuly message. Nice Job!
09/24/08
With you standing by I might even consider attempting a jigsaw puzzle - very well written - great analogy.
09/24/08
Love the adaptation of a puzzle in this. I have a friend who once received a similar word picture through a puzzle. Very good!
09/24/08
This is so beautifully written. I, too, love puzzles...of all kinds :)