The Official Writing Challenge
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Interesting story. Sounded as if it took place in the middle ages. Good job.
I like the setting for your story. I also like the end, although it surprised me a bit, since there didn't seem to be a background for it in the story before that. Thanks for sharing!
I liked this. It's well written and kept my attention. But, I have to admit I didn't quite understand the ending. Nice job with the writing and setting the scene.
The Forgotten One has me intrigued! Would like to know more about this one.
Nice work!
Oh, this was very good. I kept thinking that the king was the Christ figure, and then you brought Christ himself into the picture at the end. Wasn't expecting that. Great job.