The Official Writing Challenge
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09/22/08
Interesting story. Sounded as if it took place in the middle ages. Good job.
09/23/08
I like the setting for your story. I also like the end, although it surprised me a bit, since there didn't seem to be a background for it in the story before that. Thanks for sharing!
I liked this. It's well written and kept my attention. But, I have to admit I didn't quite understand the ending. Nice job with the writing and setting the scene.
The Forgotten One has me intrigued! Would like to know more about this one.
Nice work!
09/23/08
Oh, this was very good. I kept thinking that the king was the Christ figure, and then you brought Christ himself into the picture at the end. Wasn't expecting that. Great job.