The Official Writing Challenge
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09/12/08
I love your title. I could see the whole conversation in this heart-warming tale.
09/13/08
There was an old saying: "you don't know beans" but this Mama knows beans, and a whole lot more. Nicely done.
09/14/08
What a wise mother. I enjoyed this story. Very good!
09/14/08
I love the atmosphere you created here. I was right there on the porch with them, and the advice was beautifully shared and showed a wonderful relationship.
09/15/08
A charming story. I enjoyed this! Your characterizations made me wish I could have sat on the porch and helped the new bride and wise Mom with the bean snapping!
Oh, this is my kind of story. Love the dialogue, wisdom, and smooth writing style.
Awww. I love the title, the pace and the wonderful dialogue. This is great! I could picture the whole thing.
This was indeed, masterfully done.
09/17/08
This was beautiful and a great way to approach the topic. Well done.
Very, very well done. I really enjoyed the read.
Great lesson within a sweet story. Well done.