The Official Writing Challenge
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09/12/08
I love your title. I could see the whole conversation in this heart-warming tale.
09/13/08
There was an old saying: "you don't know beans" but this Mama knows beans, and a whole lot more. Nicely done.
09/14/08
What a wise mother. I enjoyed this story. Very good!
09/14/08
I love the atmosphere you created here. I was right there on the porch with them, and the advice was beautifully shared and showed a wonderful relationship.
09/15/08
A charming story. I enjoyed this! Your characterizations made me wish I could have sat on the porch and helped the new bride and wise Mom with the bean snapping!
09/15/08
Oh, this is my kind of story. Love the dialogue, wisdom, and smooth writing style.
09/15/08
Awww. I love the title, the pace and the wonderful dialogue. This is great! I could picture the whole thing.
09/17/08
This was indeed, masterfully done.
09/17/08
This was beautiful and a great way to approach the topic. Well done.
09/17/08
Very, very well done. I really enjoyed the read.
09/17/08
Great lesson within a sweet story. Well done.