The Official Writing Challenge
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09/13/08
Wow! This reminds me of my very favorite YA book, "The Giver"...a look at an alternate world, with deep lessons for our own. A very successful experiment, in my eyes!
09/13/08
Very well written story. Good descriptions. Interesting view of an alternate world. Nicely done. (Jan, The Giver came to my mind too.)
09/13/08
I had already thought of The Giver before seeing Jan's comment, so I mentioned it. Very good job.