The Official Writing Challenge
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07/11/05
Wow. Awesome! This is the first story I've read today; the title hooked me right off. I love the parallel between the girl and the beach. Good job!
07/11/05
Wonderful, great parallel, so well written and the descriptions are so clear that I felt I was riding along with you.
07/11/05
A powerful story -would love to see what happens next.
07/13/05
Yours is the caliber of writing that I aspire to. Thank you for sharing it with us!
07/14/05
Your descriptions are great, and the way you've linked the scenery and the girl is excellent. The take-home lesson for the reader is also very clear without being too obvious. Well done.
07/14/05
Apart from the fact that this is a very well written story I enjoyed it because it reminded me that every journey begins with one step. Sometimes I get overwhelmed with the big picture. Thanks for posting.
07/14/05
Someone had a vision that went far past what we presently see. Wonderful, brilliant story. God bless, littlelight
Lovely, absolutely lovely. I like these lines: "It began with one person: someone with vision to see beyond the present circumstance; someone who remembered this spot as Shell Beach, known for its clams, and with faith enough to reclaim it. I wonder who?" Very inspiring. Makes me want to step out in faith, with God's help......
07/15/05
excellent writing. Very very strong piece.
This is a very creative piece! I enjoyed it! Well written.
Wow! I LOVE this story. Your message is strong and powerful, your description is great, the parallel is wonderful. Just awesome!
07/18/05
Wonderful story! Well written and incredibly descriptive. I'm dying to know what happens next!