The Official Writing Challenge
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LOVE the image of the Lord with the dishtowel! What a fun way to use the topic word. Your characters are vivid and great fun to read, with distinct and well-realized personalities. Great job!
Great descriptions and good characters. Very well told story. Nicely done.
Very entertaining and great dialogue, a delight to read.
Wonderful! What a creative tie-in to snap. The Lord with a dishtowel...I love it!
This is cute. I love the idea of the Lord snapping his towel at her. And I'm glad she knows she deserves it! Nicely done.
Oh my, this was too funny. LOVED loved loved the God wielded dishtowel. Kudos!
I could almost hear the music! Well written. Very vivid and visual. And I think the title is great!
I like the color blind twist at the end. Nice use of topic in the story and good character interactions. Good Job!
Great writing....I wasn't sure where the story was going; I was grateful she learned her lesson in the end. Only red ink: you don't need an apostrophe in the "lets" on the last line. That's just a tiny little thing, though. :) Excellent job!
This is so funny -and a very creative take on the topic.
Wow, excellent story! Ouch, with the dishtowel. :) Don't you love the color/word chartreuse! :)
Your writing is EXCELLENT. The characters are descriptions are unique and and well developed. You have talent. I didn't have much sympathy for the MC. I'm glad she confessed in the end. Nice Job!
Excellently written with great descriptions throughout. I love your title! Creative for sure. Well done.
Very cute story. Enjoyable read.
I love your writing style. So much spunk, sarcasm, and humor in each piece you write. I also lvoed the name of your club - "Bling." LOL. So fitting to today's generation.