The Official Writing Challenge
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09/11/08
Yes it does sound like fun, maybe my little girls and I will play it some dark night!
09/12/08
This story was just plain fun! Great writing.
09/12/08
Sounds like a fun game for kids. Very good descriptions. Well done.
09/15/08
I enjoyed the suspense in the beginning and then, turning into fun. Very entertaining.
09/15/08
What fun! Very engaging and enjoyable story!
09/15/08
Very fun! I enjoyed this read!
09/16/08
Is this a real game? The Uncle is cool. Your descriptions were excellent, especially at the beginning. Very good writing. You put me there. (Please don't tell me boys about this game.)
09/18/08
You certainly captured the "boy" personalities in the actions and taunts in this piece. Really well done. :)
10/06/08
Cute story, Lynne, the beginning had me thinking maybe a serious spy story. I've played this game too, but with an elastic band. Boy, those things sting!