The Official Writing Challenge
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Yes it does sound like fun, maybe my little girls and I will play it some dark night!
This story was just plain fun! Great writing.
09/12/08
Sounds like a fun game for kids. Very good descriptions. Well done.
I enjoyed the suspense in the beginning and then, turning into fun. Very entertaining.
09/15/08
What fun! Very engaging and enjoyable story!
09/15/08
Very fun! I enjoyed this read!
Is this a real game? The Uncle is cool. Your descriptions were excellent, especially at the beginning. Very good writing. You put me there. (Please don't tell me boys about this game.)
You certainly captured the "boy" personalities in the actions and taunts in this piece. Really well done. :)
10/06/08
Cute story, Lynne, the beginning had me thinking maybe a serious spy story. I've played this game too, but with an elastic band. Boy, those things sting!