The Official Writing Challenge
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09/13/08
Absolutely haunting and real and frightening. You sent chills up my spine. Masterful.
09/13/08
I'm waiting for the sequel. Well done.
This is so well down. Your descriptions put me right in the middle of this horrible scene. Excellent.
I'm sorry. I meant "Well Done!"
Wow. What a picture you have painted! You really captured the despair and the increasing hopelessness of the situation. Good work!
09/17/08
Powerfully gripping.
09/17/08
I was trudging along with them through every word. Very powerful.
09/17/08
Gripping! Please tell me there will be more?
WOW! What a visual. Great job!