The Official Writing Challenge
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07/11/05
Wow, so cute, and well done. Thank you.
07/11/05
Creatively written. I enjoyed the humorous touches :)
07/12/05
Wow - I'm in awe - this is great!!!
07/13/05
Very creative! Good job.
07/14/05
Fun story. Love the way you show the character of the young whale and the Jonah reference.
07/14/05
Now that I know who wrote this it is even funnier :) Ever feel a little like a beached whale? Very clever.
07/14/05
I'm blown away by your creativity - writing from the perspective of a beached whale! Only a pregnant woman could pull that off.
07/14/05
I liked the banter back and forth. Very cute story worthy of telling.
God bless, littlelight
07/14/05
Really good! Creative! I liked the childish wonder! :)
Very cute - very touchable. I ended thinking, "Hmmmm, yeah, I can identify with that beached whale!"
07/15/05
he he. Very cute. I chuckled throughout the whale's thought process. This would make a great children's book about saving the whales. :-)
Blessings, Lynda
07/15/05
pretty funny! good job!
haha! This was cute! Very creative and I loved the tie-in to Jonah.