The Official Writing Challenge
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09/13/08
Very nicely done - you captured the mood of the congregation, and the change, very well. Very well crafted also.
09/13/08
Oh wow! You are an excellent poet. Love the message you shared. So very talented!
09/13/08
I really like how this is written. This is how a "church" is supposed to work. I love your lesson.
Love the change in the congregation, great message.
09/14/08
Love the title--it perfectly fits the mood of the poem, and captures the very important lesson you've given us here!
Very Nice. I'm not a poet, but I really enjoyed this one. It reminded me of a church I know of. I'm glad got their attention and they did the right thing. Great!
09/16/08
I enjoyed the flow and content of this poem. A wonderful reminder to consider others before ourselves. Thanks!
09/17/08
Very nice. I love the response of the congregation once the widow's need was known!
09/17/08
INcredible. ENtertaining. WONderful. What a creative way to approach the topic, and it had perfect flow. Loved it!
Great job ... from the title to the end. Very well done.
Nice reminder to work towards unity in the body.