The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautifully written poem. Lovely setting, but evil is there. Just the deceit the devil uses. Nice ending. Very well done. Thanks.
This is what I call a real poem - it rhymes. I can't get my head round poems that don't ryhme.

Thanks for a lovely read.
Charla -- your writing is poetic and powerful . And this, "Shivering cold she was entranced, -- Upon her heart the devil danced. -- Your worth totals less than nil-- Her captorís voice meant to kill." Wow! I love your message of hope, "Drowsy waved brushed moonlit sands -- The night she held her Father's hands." This is wonderfully written.