The Official Writing Challenge
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09/11/08
A very good take on doubting Thomas. Nice descriptions. Well done.
09/17/08
I liked you descriptive writing. Well done. Thanks
09/18/08
Congratulations on your 1st Place and EC! Unique, fun take on the topic. I liked your 'master/disciple' motif with the children. Nice Job!
Congratulation on your well deserved win. Gread job!
Congratulations on taking first place and EC.
Great story, fun to read. Wonderful take on the topic.
09/18/08
Congratulations on your Editor's Choice!!! :)
09/19/08
This TOTALLY captured the dialogue of little boys...well done!
09/23/08
Congratulations on your EC win. Great story and loved how you worked the topic into it--was beginning to wonder at first. Cute little guys too with believeable dialog.