The Official Writing Challenge
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09/11/08
Poignant and with a bitter-sweet ending. I like how you described the waves in your opening paragraph and how their motion affected her.
09/17/08
Yes very poignant - I'm a chap, but a softie - you nearly had me blubbering. A very emotive piece. Thank you very much