The Official Writing Challenge
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How many times have we seen "this game" that leaves heart-ache for one team and joy for the other. You've described the emotions perfectly. I love your ending with its tie-in to football. Great title, too.
Love this story! It read smoothly all the way through, held my attention and kept me pushing forward for the finish. Great use of the topic. Thanks for sharing your talent!
Very nice take on the topic. Sara is one wise woman! And God Bless Todd for not letting his disappoint take over the moment. Great job.
I like a good romance....great job on this one!
Wonderful story! I was right there with you for every word. Well done.
Okay, this is my favorite SNAP story that I've read so far! As a Texas gal and a football fan, this was so beleivable. This is the first football snap story I've read. I loved the description of the football player crying in the locker room at the beginning. The story flowed smoothly and was easy to follow, even with the thoughts and flashbacks. I really loved the ending, with her words tying it back to the snap. Perfect! (I aslo LOVE romances, so this really ranks high with me.)
I love a good romance, and this one qualifies! The last liine is perfect.
The descriptions are so vivid, I could see the game and feel the emotions throughout. I especially like the phrase, "The beaten down warrior..." Very well written and excellent job with the topic.
Oh, now THAT is a great ending. Applause from me. Original take on the topic as well. Excellent!
Very well done ... a great read. Thanks for sharing
First attempt? Nice job!
Your first attempt at a romantic piece was a definite TOUCHDOWN! Great job! :)
Congratulations on your win. This is one of my favority entries this week. Love your smooth writing style.
Best one this week. Real life writing. We could use him on the west coast...
Since I'm not a sports follower, not sure what the "snap" was but I truly enjoyed the story. I could feel Todd's emotions and was so happy that this ended on a high note. Great writing and loved the MC. Congrats on your placement.