The Official Writing Challenge
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I thank God so very much for the way he understands us,
and listens and keeps on loving us no matter what.

Praise a living God!!
09/11/08
Your title is perfect. Your writing is good in this story, I had great empathy toward your MC. I loved this, "Then gently, like a breeze that caresses your face in the spring she felt it come creeping into the recesses of her heart…"
Nicely written. Clearly portrayed. So true. A comforting, inspirational piece. Thank you for sharing.