The Official Writing Challenge
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09/11/08
I was fascinated with your names: character, language, being, and place names. I wouldn't have any problem believing the spiritual aspects of this, especially since Satan imitates a lot of what God does. Great writing… I didn't want it to end….
09/15/08
Very interesting story....I definitely wanted to read more! Watch your commas, but otherwise great writing!
How creative you are. This reads like a novel. I wanted background info because it really made me curious. Your names and descriptions are very good. Super job.
Oooh, this was so good! I want to see the battle when the real and fake 'Forgotten One' meet. I always love reading your stories.