The Official Writing Challenge
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09/11/08
Fun, creative take on the topic, "tan in a snap". :) Your ending was great, with the white gloves. Lucy did care what the neighbors thought. :)
Love the humor, and great dialogue between the ladies.
Great story, but a vocabulary error was a little jarring. Bizarre means odd or weird. I think your church was having a bazaar. That's a Persian loan word meaning marketplace.