The Official Writing Challenge
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09/04/08
I enjoy walking through a cemetery... just to remember. You descriptions are poetic, "graveyard was laid to rest," "grey guardians of the ancestors who rest eternally at their feet, immortal reminders of our mortal remains". It's easy for the reader to picture everything as your describe. Your writing is beautiful as you illustrate this wonderful truth.
09/04/08
Superb writing...the descriptions are amazingly vivid. I hope this piece places well.
Great descriptions! I liked the subtlety of the faith message - It is pushed though like a whisper. Good job.
This is really, really good!
Love it! And I love walking through cemeteries...great places to think!
I enjoyed the smooth beautiful writing and wonderful message.