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09/04/08
Perhaps you stopped someone from starting a life-time addiction. You've given a perfect illustration of peer pressure. I had to smile at your ending "that figures, it sounds like something you would have done."
09/05/08
I too, had to smile at the last line. Big lesson here, for such a short story. Well done!
09/05/08
Sounds like having to "tattle" was more traumatising to you than all the other drama. Yet, on the day of accounting, you saved the day. Good story.
Good story, and I'm glad you tattled. Years ago when I was twenty I smoked two cigarettes - and understood how people got hooked! I'm glad you were able to keep your friend from smoking!
Good story and sounds like a group of kids. Glad you had the courage to tattle.