The Official Writing Challenge
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09/04/08
Great illustration. The little tv's showing the other consequences was a nice touch, especially since we couldn't quite see what they were.
09/06/08
Clever take - and a different look at the whole idea of consequences. Nicely done.
09/08/08
I had to laugh out loud when I saw the mother's name! I've never had a Jimmy (no sons, only daughters), but I sure loved this story. Very creative, witty, and GREAT naming!
Very creative take on the topic. Well done.
09/10/08
Your work is always just a little different, but I enjoy it. Good job.
09/10/08
I loved the opening visual. I was imagining Jimmy doing his goofy little victory dance!

The game show part was clever.
What terrific story and a clever take on the topic. Jan (and Jan) must be a very good mother!
Creative take on the topic. Liked the lesson, and enjoyed the read. Well done.
09/10/08
I just bet if we all had to face immediate consequences like this boy, we'd be thinking twice about our "bad" decisions! I like that you didn't do the common "good angel" and "bad devil" on his shoulder thing. Very modern and clever twist on the old morality tales.
09/11/08
Congratulations on your EC. Nice job with the topic. Love the mom's name. :)
09/14/08
A very creative take on the topic - too bad the 750 word limit can't allow you to give more detail into the consequences of the other options. A very enjoyable read - congratulations on the EC.