The Official Writing Challenge
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09/04/08
I would have loved to have seen someone talking to a gas pump. That is hilarious. :) This sounds like a true story and you've expertly written the chilling details. My heart goes out to you.
09/05/08
This is great story because people often manipulate in similar manner. We do need to call their bluff and not co-operate with illogical behaviour.
Didn't realize I was holding my breath until I got to the end of the story. I'm so glad the MC found the courage to call Ray's bluff.