The Official Writing Challenge
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I would have loved to have seen someone talking to a gas pump. That is hilarious. :) This sounds like a true story and you've expertly written the chilling details. My heart goes out to you.
This is great story because people often manipulate in similar manner. We do need to call their bluff and not co-operate with illogical behaviour.
Didn't realize I was holding my breath until I got to the end of the story. I'm so glad the MC found the courage to call Ray's bluff.