The Official Writing Challenge
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07/11/05
Thank you for this thoughtful piece.
07/11/05
Very nice, wonderful images.
07/11/05
It was nice the way you brought this full circle, with the mother and the journey at the end. Well done.
07/13/05
This is awesome! One of the best I've read this week. Good job!
07/14/05
Like the extended family and the relationship Faith has with her grandmother and the way your character saw life and death as an adventure.
07/14/05
This was very good writing for a short story. Sometimes what we imagine is just as big as the reality. Thank you for sharing, littlelight
I enjoyed reliving that "first" glorious experience! Good framing and nice ending, bringing everything together.
07/15/05
nice parallels between beach and heaven. great!
Expressed very well.
07/18/05
Kelly, I don't get the opportunity to do this every Challenge, but I try as often as I can to pop in and let people know when their entry was in the semi-finals - which is exactly where "The Invitation" was. In fact, your entry was next in line for the Editor's Choice awards. You came in at 9th place overall. So well done and keep up the great writing! With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)