The Official Writing Challenge
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09/04/08
I never liked removing eggs from beneath a hen either. :) Great job with the these descriptions, "boards so creaky" and "looking mean as sin" and of course I love the "Godzilla-Bird" at the end. :)
09/10/08
This reminded me of my canary hens when I try to get too near their eggs, to check things. They puff up twice there size and the cocky ones have a good peck at me. Thanks for the amusing read.
09/10/08
sorry for the there - should be their
Cute and creative. Good job.
This was fun and it brought back memories of hens we had on the farm.
09/10/08
Very cute. I was attacked once by a godzilla-bird (a goose), so I totally related to your MC. Very fun read.
LOL! Very entertaining. I really enjoyed reading this. Well done.