The Official Writing Challenge
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09/04/08
What a fun story! I love the infinity speech.
09/06/08
Enjoyed this :) Good job with the dialog especially.
09/08/08
I could just see the whole thing! Too funny! I wondered how he would get out of tipping a BULL.
Cute! I'd forgotten about tipping cows. THis was fun to read.
09/09/08
Really funny story!

The POV switches threw me off a little bit.

This was very visual; it read like a short scene from a longer movie. Liked it a lot.