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Ah, a romance with shades of the phantom of the opera and Quasimodo. This was wonderful to read with your creative names like "The Forgotten One," "Civa," and "Calie," and then your character descriptions, "gristle for bones. The fact the Nolga didn't sing audibly is great. Do you have more "The Forgotten One" stories, I'm intrigued by his character?
I liked the cadence and flavor of this story but kept getting confused as to who said and did what and to whom. Read it several times and still not sure. Seems like it's a chapter from a book and if I could read the whole thing I'd be familiar with the characters enough to not have to try to figure it all out.
Ahh, The Forgotten One is playing matchmaker... what a great idea. The topic is nicely covered, and I can't wait to see how the romance progresses :)
Well done!
Your Forgotten One stories are always top notch! This one hits the mark on the topic. Thanks!