The Official Writing Challenge
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09/04/08
I had to do a double-take at your title. LOL Your words are great, "near death experience" and "like a slug and plopped on the front of her snow-white blouse." I had no idea where this was going, and then, ... I LOVE your ending. You've packed so much fun in this (except, of course, for the line about the cat) :)
09/05/08
Love the person behind the voice in this piece. He's great at hiding behind everything and everyone, but he comes right out at the end.
09/06/08
Loved your descriptions and the language of this piece!
09/11/08
Congratulations on your EC. Loved the voice. Nice job with the topic.
09/14/08
I enjoyed your story from beginning to end - great MC voice & great descriptions. Congratulations on your EC.