The Official Writing Challenge
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09/04/08
Your opening paragraphs are wonderful. This is a great open-ended mystery… that I'm wishing wasn't so open-ended. :) My mind was racing in several directions for possibilities. Excellent work.
09/06/08
I was drawn right into your story and the ending was just right for an appropriate twist!
09/08/08
Really clever...loved the ending. The dialogue is realistic and really drew me in. Great job.
09/09/08
What happened? What was he not admitting? Why? I want to know!!! Great writing - totally drew me in.
09/09/08
Super suspense! Love the open-endedness, and the mystery...great job!
Oh, I enjoyed this mystery. I couldn't wait for the next paragraph to see what was to come but the ending is perfect.
09/10/08
Great piece, I really wanted to know what he did!
09/10/08
Great!! The suspense is killing me, though!
09/10/08
Wow-love the mystery and suspense of this story. Reminds me of Ted Dekker's "THR3E". That open end is begging for a sequel...right?