The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked the teen newspaper angle. I think your ending got a bit rushed. I lost empathy for the characters and I didn't feel like she learning anything. Good topic - keep writing!
09/08/08
I think Allie is a strong character. Perhaps, with the word limit, you should have developed one part of this story (like when she decides to expose Helen) and took out some extraneous stuff (like the part about the "twerps", who don't figure into the story.)