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09/04/08
A beautiful story—and a much needed reminder for us to pray for those who don't have the freedoms that we enjoy. Well done.
09/05/08
Fascinating - you put me right there. I know situations like this are so common in other countries. You brought me to it. Excellent.
09/08/08
This was very good, with an unexpected tun at the end. This is a good way to remember those who aren't as lucky as we who have free access to His Word are. thank you.
09/09/08
Beautifully written, and a bit of a change of pace for you. Suspenseful and inspiring.

I caught an "it's" that should be an "its" in an early paragraph.

This reflects either first-hand knowledge or superb research--just an excellent piece.
09/26/08
Beautiful story...a powerful message. Thank you.