The Official Writing Challenge
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This story is great, really great. Good message, good dialog, good flow, good job!
You did a good job of evoking that angry feeling of shame a person might feel when others are mocking them for doing what they feel is right. One improvement you might make would be to make it harder for her to decide to walk out--give her a reason to stay and try to fit in. Then her decision to leave will be more impressive.
A nice story that's both comforting as well as challenging.