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09/05/08
Wow, this was really touching. I am amazed by the layers of sybolism from the spider to the music to the relationship between the two. Good job!
09/05/08
I found the opening of this story very confusing, but after, I really got into it.
This story has a lot of potential. Powerful. Very powerful.
09/07/08
Great idea for this topic! I love stories of forgiveness.

If you quote from a published work (as in your title), your should give the attribution in a footnote. The poem was written by Mary Howitt (and begins with the words "Will you walk...").

The recurring musical metaphor is very good. Strong entry!
09/10/08
A beautiful story of forgiveness and love! Well done.