The Official Writing Challenge
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09/07/08
Really, really clever application of the topic for this week.

I love your rhymes--you're not afraid to go for a near rhyme in order for your poem to be unforced and natural.

Maybe a few tweaks on the meter for flow, but this is a top-notch, well-done poem.
09/08/08
What a great look through Adam and Eve's eyes! Very thought provoking and enlightening too. Great spin!