The Official Writing Challenge
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08/29/08
Love the imabic pentameter, and the sophisticated rhymes.

Beautiful, beautiful message, in a lovely poem.
I loved the message and I loved your poem. Well done!
09/02/08
Beautiful poem about the work and vigilance needed in marriage. Very well done.
This poem covers the ups and downs of marriage in a very beautiful and sophisticated way. I've missed reading your entries, Holly. I hope that I haven't been overlooking them lately. They are great.