The Official Writing Challenge
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08/29/08
I like the meditative tone of this piece and the contrast between what we want and what God requires of us.
08/29/08
Love your central section with the contrasts, and your "please stop me!" Very well done.
09/02/08
Good lessons here. Like the way you contrasted between you and God.