The Official Writing Challenge
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You summarized Hosea beautifully in your poem.
I like your picture of God's patient endurance.
08/31/08
Love each and every well-placed word! Very lovely and descriptive.
What a beautiful, absolutely perfect summation of the message of Hosea. Exxcellent!
09/01/08
A wonderful idea for the topic, and well executed.
09/01/08
The poem flowed so nicely and was a wonderful take on the topic. Great job.
09/01/08
Super! At first I wondered why in the world this person would marry the one in question at all, but then I realized who I must be reading about and it made me appreciate the book of Hosea, and God's love and patience, all the more. Love it.
I normally dont do poetry, but while moving the cursor to hit the 'back' button, your words caught my eye. And I couldnt stop reading! Excellent work!