The Official Writing Challenge
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Your piece is very entertaining. I enjoyed the voice "dripping" with sarcasm.
08/30/08
Terrific voice for the MC! I could see and feel everything she was going through. Great word choices.
I hope the dear soul really does take a long, hard look at what being "born again" does and does not mean to her...and what it should mean.
08/31/08
Been there and it just doesn't seem to get any easier! The MC is familiar to me because I see myself and my reactions in her...patience in line is not my forte.