The Official Writing Challenge
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08/28/08
Very good story of witnessing and prayer. Hopefully we will know in this life if we've helped lead someone to the Lord. It came full circle in this piece. Nicely done.
08/29/08
Great illustration of patience!

You might want to take a look at punctuation of dialogue, and capitalization (or not) of dialogue tags.

I enjoyed this peek into a culture that we don't often read about here on FW. Thanks!
08/26/10
I'm so pleased you left a comment on my recent entry (Stained Glass), because I haven't run across your name until now. Thank you! And, now I got to read a wonderful story of yours. I hope you're still writing, too (although I know from personal experience how life can interrupt and temporarily sidetrack us from writing). I hope to read more of your work. God bless you!