The Official Writing Challenge
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08/28/08
Good story. Patience brings good things. Nicely done.
08/29/08
Nice story with a really good title.

It may be lacking in conflict...that's what will pull a reader along who may not be drawn by the subject matter.

Your writing is top-notch, and I enjoyed your descriptions.
I was there with you all the way. You wrote my story.
LOL. Wonderful !!!!