The Official Writing Challenge
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08/29/08
Sweet story that mothers of young children will really relate to.

I think it's "corned" beef and "chipped" beef, but this might be a regional difference.

I love the note and the opology...precious.
Yours is a very sweet story that any mommy can understand and appreciate. The verse is most appropriate to the story.
08/29/08
What an endearing apology. The work of prayer (even--or especially--those simple, quickly uttered ones of mothers) is evident in the ending here. But, I would like to see the reflection embedded more with the scene of the sleeping girls. It seems too separate.
I really enjoyed this story..
I could relate to everything. It was a writing very well done....