The Official Writing Challenge
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08/29/08
Wonderful way to write a devotional, with a "hook" to really get your readers to want to keep reading. Very interesting.

FYI--you wanted "sheer" rather than "shear", and "Satan" should be capitalized. The capital letter, in grammar, doesn't indicate honor, simply a specific name (rather than a common noun).

I loved that you included the example of your daughter and fear of heights--all the personal anecdotes really added to the devotional. Very well done.
Your devotional is very well written with examples very apt for your message.