The Official Writing Challenge
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08/29/08
Good story for teens to read--that's such a difficult time of life!

A few minor things: a misspelling in the title, perhaps a few too many exclamation points in the narrative, and a POV switch at the end....all very minor and easily fixed.

I'd love to see this in a teen curriculum, it'd be a great discussion-starter.
In this story, very appropriate for teens, I like how you showed Prudence's patience and good advice for Katrina.