The Official Writing Challenge
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08/28/08
That longing for a baby does some pretty wacky things to us ladies, doesn't it?! I still remember the feelings when I saw those double lines.
Your descriptions are very good of the hope, the disappointment, the rebirth of hope, and the joy in becoming pregnant. I was hoping with your mc.
08/31/08
Yes, I remember my own astonished look at the "stick"-I was 35! Sometimes we DO know our own bodies better than any doctor. Great descriptions and mood in this story. I could feel the MC's desire to have a child.
Well there's a new word for my vocabulary - just not sure I can pronounce it. Anyway, you sure knew every emotion of your mc and related them so well. Bet you've been there. A good piece of writing!