The Official Writing Challenge
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08/28/08
Bravely spoken, and how wonderful that you will benefit your nephew with wisdom.
Your story shows how the lack of patience can affect your whole life. It's good you can share your hard-earned wisdome with your nephew.
Your story would showcase better if you would leave a space between paragraphs.
08/28/08
Oh dear, how sad!

I would like to see this written in more of a story format, with dialogue, and maybe a flashback story of you and the pastor's son.

Thank you for sharing this lesson with us.