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I love the comparisons with simple things in her everyday life. Sure made me more willing to be patient for the little things that I am waiting for when she has something so big that she needs to be patient for. Very heartwarming and inspiring!
There were some wondeferful illustrations of what patience was like, all sewn up in a well written story.
In your excellent story I love the examples in nature that the little girl found to teach her patience. Well done.
Wonderful--I love the little girl's attitude, despite her disability.
this was absolutely precious!
I like the happiness this little girl shows, though she has so many problems to overcome. Children have a way of getting on with life without complaint that we "oldsters" could really learn from. Fall down? Get up and keep going!
“No problem, Preachy. You tell them I know all about patience.” Love this ending. This girl's got attitude and we all need some of that kind. Wonderful writing!