The Official Writing Challenge
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08/28/08
I love the comparisons with simple things in her everyday life. Sure made me more willing to be patient for the little things that I am waiting for when she has something so big that she needs to be patient for. Very heartwarming and inspiring!
08/30/08
There were some wondeferful illustrations of what patience was like, all sewn up in a well written story.
In your excellent story I love the examples in nature that the little girl found to teach her patience. Well done.
08/31/08
Wonderful--I love the little girl's attitude, despite her disability.
ohhhhhhhh!
this was absolutely precious!
08/31/08
I like the happiness this little girl shows, though she has so many problems to overcome. Children have a way of getting on with life without complaint that we "oldsters" could really learn from. Fall down? Get up and keep going!
“No problem, Preachy. You tell them I know all about patience.” Love this ending. This girl's got attitude and we all need some of that kind. Wonderful writing!