The Official Writing Challenge
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You really described well a situation where patience was needed. I enjoyed the underlying humor and appreciated the message.
08/28/08
Oh, I can SO relate, having RLS myself...what misery on an airplane!

Well-written...maybe just a tad light on topic, and the ending felt a bit detached.

I really liked the voice of your narrator...very authentic and relatable.
08/29/08
I like the theme of this piece. We so often forget that prayer is the first thing (not a last resort) that we're to do. I just wish that your MC had prayed with her right there on the plane, rather than keeping the prayer to herself.