The Official Writing Challenge
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08/21/08
Suspenseful (And I've got a pretty good guess who wrote this...)
08/22/08
I am not a science fiction fan at all, but this was excellent.
08/23/08
I want to read more! You dropped me into a whole new world and effortlessly made me a part of it. Great job.
08/24/08
Great characterization and descriptions. I definitely want to read the rest of the story. Great fit for the topic too :)
I felt like I was watching a science fiction movie. Good writing.