The Official Writing Challenge
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08/21/08
Oh wow, incredible take on the topic and beautiful imagery.
08/21/08
An interesting allegory, rich in description.

I'd have liked less on the allegorical characters and more on Simon--he was the most interesting character in the story, the only non-allegorical one, and I wanted to know his "back" story better.

Some errors in spelling and punctuation mildly distracted at times.

This is a very visual piece!