The Official Writing Challenge
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08/23/08
You sent me scrambling for my Bible to read this passage. Your entire story is so authentic! The dialog is great, and you've really brought out the characters - even David who is a "bit player" in this scene. Simply great writing.
08/23/08
What the perfect Bible story for this topic! And you definitely gave it a new perspective, and a life that I truly appreciate. Wonderfully done.
08/24/08
I've often wondered about this event in David's life. You've brought it to life. Nice work.
08/25/08
Well done! Not many people know this story and you have taken the characters and plot and created an interesting scenerio.
Good job!
"Back to the Bible" you took us directly and forcefully with an excellent story.
This was definitely something I had not remembered. Great retelling of the story for this topic.
08/27/08
Nice work! I can only echo all the praise that I read in the comments before my own. Blessings, Cheri
09/26/08
Ooh. I liked this! It makes me want to read the story again! I had no idea at the beginning which story you were using as a springboard. The development of David's character made me really see him. Great descriptive elements!