The Official Writing Challenge
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08/23/08
You sent me scrambling for my Bible to read this passage. Your entire story is so authentic! The dialog is great, and you've really brought out the characters - even David who is a "bit player" in this scene. Simply great writing.
08/23/08
What the perfect Bible story for this topic! And you definitely gave it a new perspective, and a life that I truly appreciate. Wonderfully done.
08/24/08
I've often wondered about this event in David's life. You've brought it to life. Nice work.
08/25/08
Well done! Not many people know this story and you have taken the characters and plot and created an interesting scenerio.
Good job!
08/26/08
"Back to the Bible" you took us directly and forcefully with an excellent story.
08/27/08
This was definitely something I had not remembered. Great retelling of the story for this topic.
08/27/08
Nice work! I can only echo all the praise that I read in the comments before my own. Blessings, Cheri
09/26/08
Ooh. I liked this! It makes me want to read the story again! I had no idea at the beginning which story you were using as a springboard. The development of David's character made me really see him. Great descriptive elements!